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Comrade 67

Comrade 67

A few weeks later….

The Festival of Flames had always been a night of joy and fire, a tradition older than most of the wolves dancing under the golden lights. It was meant to celebrate survival, honor fallen ancestors, and welcome the power of the full moon. But tonight, for Eva, it felt like standing at the edge of something dangerous—something burning too bright, too fast.

The Silverstone grounds glowed with torches and bonfires. Crimson silk banners waved in the breeze. Laughter echoed between trees, and the rhythmic beat of drums filled the air like a second heartbeat. Everyone wore their finest. Eva’s dress shimmered like starlight, silver thread stitched into the soft folds of deep midnight blue. Her hair was pinned back with a moon-shaped comb. She looked like a queen, but her eyes carried storms.

Eva stood alone near the steps of the platform, watching the flames flicker in the distance. Her hands were clasped tightly in front of her, as if letting go might cause her to unravel. The sound of footsteps behind her made her tense, but she didn’t turn.

“You look like you’re trying to disappear,” came a familiar voice.

She turned then, slowly, finding Valen standing behind her. He wore a dark tunic embroidered with silver thread that caught the firelight. His presence was magnetic, his smile warm. But there was always something unreadable in his eyes—like a hidden page she wasn’t allowed to turn.

“I’m just watching,” Eva said, brushing a hand across her arm. “This night belongs to them.”

Valen offered her his hand. “It can belong to you, too. Dance with me.”

She hesitated for a heartbeat.

Then she nodded.

As Valen led her to the center, the crowd made space. They began to dance, slow and smooth, her hand in his, his other hand resting on her waist. The music softened, and for a moment, everything else blurred—the war, the prophecy, the fear. All she saw was the way his eyes searched hers, the way his voice trembled when he whispered her name.

“You deserve to feel beautiful tonight,” he said softly. “Not because of your title. But because you are.”

Eva looked away, blinking back a sudden rush of emotion. “You always say the right thing.”

“Because I see you,” Valen replied. “All of you.”

From the edge of the crowd, Max stood stiff as stone. His jaw clenched, fists curled tight at his sides. His gaze didn’t leave her—not once. Every spin she took in Valen’s arms was another strike to his chest. Every smile she gave Valen was a reminder of how late he’d been.

She had waited. Once. Long ago. He hadn’t noticed her then. Or maybe he had, and just didn’t know how to care the right way.

Now someone else did.

Max couldn’t breathe. The heat from the bonfires was nothing compared to the heat rising in his chest. Jealousy, pain, and regret twisted together like barbed vines around his ribs.

Beside him, Dany appeared with a half-empty cup of wine. He sipped it slowly, watching the same scene Max couldn’t tear his eyes from.

“She looks happy for the first time in a very long time,” Dany said.

Max didn’t respond.

Dany followed his line of sight, eyes settling on Eva’s glowing face in the firelight.

“She waited for you,” Dany added after a pause. “Years, Max. You didn’t come.”

Max finally looked at him, his voice low and harsh. “It wasn’t that simple.”

“It never is,” Dany replied. He turned to face him directly. “But you waited too long.”

Max’s chest tightened.

Dany’s next words were quieter, but sharper than any blade. “Now someone else is writing her love story.”

Max didn’t answer. His eyes went back to the dance, to the way Valen’s fingers trailed along Eva’s back as the music slowed to its end. To the smile on her lips that used to belong to him—at least in the world of what-ifs.

And in the silence that followed, as the flames crackled and laughter rose all around him, Max whispered to himself, broken but certain:

“Then I’ll burn the pages and start over.”

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Princess Evangeline of Morwyn sat in the quiet waiting room of the royal physician’s office, her mind a whirlwind of fear and fragile hope. The grand palace, bathed in soft afternoon light, felt both like a home and a cage. She had been married to Crown Prince Sebastian of Valdris for three years, but their union was nothing more than a political arrangement—an alliance forged by their fathers to secure peace between their lands.

From the very beginning, Sebastian made it clear that his marriage to Evangeline was purely out of duty, not affection. They slept in separate chambers, exchanged only polite words in public, and maintained a cold civility that masked the emptiness beneath. Evangeline had once dreamed that time might change things, that she might earn his heart, but years of distance had buried that hope deep inside her.

Recently, however, her body had begun to change. She felt nauseated in the mornings, dizzy, and uncommonly tired. These signs, though subtle, stirred a small flame of longing within her—a desperate wish that she might finally be carrying his child. Perhaps, she thought, a baby could soften Sebastian’s heart and give meaning to their lifeless marriage.

When the physician, Master Aldrich, appeared at the doorway, his kind smile gave her both comfort and dread. He led her into his study, a cozy room filled with the scent of herbs, the warmth of a crackling fire, and shelves of ancient medical texts. Evangeline sat nervously as the old man took a sealed parchment from his desk.

With a gentle voice, Master Aldrich delivered the news that would change everything: “Your Highness, I’m delighted to tell you that you are indeed expecting.”

Evangeline’s breath caught in her throat. Her trembling hands broke the royal seal and scanned the words written neatly across the parchment. Pregnant. She was truly with child. Before she could even absorb the shock, Master Aldrich continued, beaming with joy—she was not carrying just one baby, but twins.

The revelation sent a rush of emotion through her—relief, disbelief, joy. Twins! Two heirs for the royal family. The weight of that realization made her dizzy, but it also filled her with warmth and purpose. For the first time in years, she smiled with genuine happiness. Perhaps this was the miracle she needed to mend what had long been broken.

In that moment, she imagined Sebastian’s face lighting up with pride and excitement. She pictured him embracing her, maybe even thanking her. The thought filled her with renewed courage. She thanked Master Aldrich graciously and insisted that she would tell Sebastian the news herself. This moment, she decided, must belong to them alone.

Walking through the grand marble corridors of the palace, Evangeline’s heart felt light for the first time in years. Servants bowed as she passed, but she hardly noticed them—her mind was focused only on Sebastian and the life growing inside her. She wanted to see him, to share the joy, to believe that maybe, just maybe, love could still bloom between them.

As she approached the door of Sebastian’s private study, her steps quickened. She called out softly, “Sebastian! My lord, I have the most wonderful news to—”

But her voice faltered.

Through the half-open door, Evangeline froze at the sight before her. Her husband stood with Lady Cordelia Ashworth, daughter of the Duke of Greymont, wrapped in his arms. The woman’s fiery red hair cascaded over Sebastian’s shoulders as he held her close. Evangeline’s heart stopped when she saw him tilt Cordelia’s chin upward and press his lips to hers—a tender, passionate kiss filled with the warmth and love she had begged the heavens for all these years.

It was everything she had ever wanted—and it wasn’t hers.

For a long, unbearable second, Evangeline could only stare. The parchment with her pregnancy confirmation still trembled in her hand. Then, in a broken whisper, she said his name: “Sebastian…”

The Crown Prince turned sharply, surprise flashing across his features before being quickly masked by his usual calm. Cordelia paled and stepped back, though Sebastian’s arm lingered protectively around her waist.

“Evangeline,” he said evenly, as though she were a stranger interrupting him, “what brings you here?”

Her throat tightened. She forced herself to stand tall, even as tears burned behind her eyes. “I… I live here,” she managed, her voice quivering. “I’m your wife.”

Sebastian’s cold gaze didn’t soften. “Is there something you need?” he asked, the same way he might address a court official.

Something inside Evangeline broke. Just minutes ago, she had been radiant with hope, ready to tell him that she carried his children—the future of his line. But now, staring at the indifference in his eyes and the woman in his arms, she realized the truth she had avoided for too long.

He would never love her. Not even their unborn children could change that.

A calmness settled over her—a cold, regal resolve that masked the chaos in her chest. Straightening her shoulders, Evangeline met his gaze with all the dignity her title demanded.

“Yes, my lord,” she said clearly. “There is something I need.”

Sebastian raised a brow, perhaps expecting her to plead, to cry, to beg for an explanation. Instead, she spoke words that shattered the silence of the study.

“I want an annulment.”

Both Sebastian and Cordelia froze. The shock in their eyes was almost satisfying. Cordelia gasped aloud, pressing a hand to her mouth, while Sebastian’s expression turned dark and unreadable.

“What did you say?” he asked in a dangerously quiet voice.

Evangeline’s chin lifted higher. Her hands no longer trembled. “You heard me perfectly,” she said. “I want our marriage annulled.”

In that instant, the timid princess who had once waited for scraps of affection was gone. What remained was a woman who had found her strength—not through her husband’s love, but through the pain he had caused.

Inside, she knew she carried the next heirs of the throne—his heirs—but she would not allow that to bind her to a man who treated her like a political pawn. She would raise her children with dignity, even if she had to walk away from the palace to do it.

The silence that followed was heavy, filled with the crackle of the fireplace and the unspoken consequences of her declaration. But Evangeline didn’t wait for a reply. Gathering her skirts, she turned toward the door, her heart broken yet unburdened.

Her steps echoed through the marble halls as she walked away from the man who had never seen her—and toward the freedom she was finally claiming for herself.

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