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Nathan froze, and confusion flickered in his gaze. What are you talking about? Why would you have Rosanne’s phone?” 

Nathan, we found the crime scene, and the phone’s here. You should come in person.” 

The voice on the line hit him like a blow, his body swaying slightly. He opened his mouth, but no sound came out of it. It was as if something had lodged in his throat

Lawrence gave his sleeve an anxious tug. Don’t just stand there! Go!” 

Snapping out of it, Nathan turned to Gemma and said, You go home. I’ll come to you in a bit.” 

With tears brimming in her eyes, Gemma reached out to stop him, but her hands merely grabbed at air

It was my first time seeing Nathan leave her for me

As I watched him hurry away, complex emotions twisted in my chest. For a moment, it felt like I had my older brother back

the one who once doted on me

At the scene, Orson handed him my phone. We found it in the corner. The splattered blood nearby looks like the victim dropped it while trying to escape.” 

Staring at the familiar pink phone case, Nathan’s breathing quickened

With trembling fingers, he entered his birthday, and the screen unlocked instantly

Lawrence swallowed hard before trying to comfort him. Maybe Rosie dropped it, and someone else picked it up.” 

Nathan mechanically nodded with a vacant gaze

Lawrence gave him a firm pat on the back and said, Stay sharp. This isn’t the time to fall apart.” 

As Nathan drew a sharp breath, he looked around, where blood stained the walls like splattered ink. A single broken chair was at the side, while a bundle of rope was discarded nearby

Scattered footprints marked the ground

I hovered close beside him, though I was now just a soul

Even now, after death, I couldn’t hold back my tremors at the sight of this place. That night still felt like a nightmare

Gemma had lured me here with the excuse that Nathan was hurt. And once I arrived, they tied me down tightly

The man had terrifying strength, and I couldn’t move an inch, no matter how much I struggled

Watching as I writhed on the floor, Gemma burst out laughing in delight. Rosanne, aren’t you supposed to be a cop’s 

daughter? Bet you never saw this coming, right

How does it feel to be tortured by people like us? It must feel good, doesn’t it?” 

I could feel my blood run cold after hearing her words. Who are you? What do you want?I asked

She had smiled and gestured to the man beside her. Go ahead, Jaxton.” 

He sneered. If we don’t make her suffer, how else can we repay Detective Roland Slade for his dedication?” 

My head snapped up at the mention of my dad’s name. You’re theCrowes?” 

Five years ago, Dad helped crack a major jewelry store robbery. During the investigation, two men had stormed in and taken me and another customer hostage

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As the lead investigator, Dad negotiated with the robbers. They demanded a huge ransom and a speedboat, and only then would they let us go

Mom, as one of the city’s top psychologists, came too. She offered to swap herself in as a hostage. My daughter’s with you, so let the other hostage go. You’ll have more leverage with us both.” 

I had a rag stuffed in my mouth and could only shake my head wildly, begging her not to

She smiled gently and said, Don’t worry. Your dad’s outside, so everything’s going to be fine.

I looked over at Dad, who gave me a small, steady nod. So, I slowly calmed down 

But just as the swap was happening, the other hostage panicked and screamed Enraged, the robbers raised their guns

My instincts took over as I shoved the hostage away to protect her. And just as the gun aimed at me, Mom threw herself in front of me as the shot went off

Dad and his team rushed in seconds later, but the robbers had fled. Instead of stopping to check on us, he ran after them

After a relentless chase, he managed to tackle one of the robbers. But a gunshot rang out from the second robber lurking in the shadows, hitting him in the head 

He died on the spot, and Mom didn’t make it to the hospital either

Just like that, Nathan and I became orphans

He couldn’t accept losing both parents in a single day and blamed their deaths on me. He believed that tragedy had happened because I’d gone to that mall 

After venting all his rage on me, he drove me out of the house. Get out! This is all your fault, you goddamn jinx! You ungrateful bitch! You’re no sister of mine!” 

I tried to explain, but he wouldn’t listen to a single word I said 

Later, he saved Gemma and took her in as family, while I became the eyesore

Gemma’s dad was Alistair Crowe, the robber Dad had caught and was executed. She’d changed her name and approached us, just to avenge her dad 

Jaxton Crowe tortured me for two days. To humiliate my parents, he chopped off my limbs and had someone violate me 

When I was barely hanging on, they thought it’d be fun to call Nathan on my phone and said I could beg for help

As the phone buzzed, the agonizing and severe bleeding pulled my consciousness in and out

When the call was finally picked up, Nathan’s annoyed voice came through. What now?” 

I forced my bloody mouth open and called out, Nathan, help” 

He cried

He cried

Status: Ongoing
Summary & Review: He cried

After her tragic death, Rosie Slade’s soul didn’t fade away like it should have. Instead, she lingered in the mortal world, bound by the haunting sight of her own lifeless remains being discovered from dumpsters and riverbanks. Her body’s gruesome state sent shockwaves through the city, causing panic and fear. The brutality of her murder drew immense public attention, forcing the authorities to bring in a top detective to lead the case — her estranged brother, Nathan Slade.

Watching Nathan arrive at the crime scene made Rosie’s spirit ache with guilt. Even in death, she was still causing him trouble, just like he had always accused her of. As Nathan examined her mutilated corpse — unaware that the victim was his own sister — Rosie could see the frown of determination etched on his face. His once-gentle eyes were now hardened, shaped by years of bitterness and resentment.

The investigation began under grim circumstances. Harlan Graves, a weary member of the forensic team, reported that the victim was a young woman in her early twenties, dead for at least forty-eight hours. Her body had been brutally dismembered; her limbs had been severed while she was still alive to prevent her from fighting back. The sheer savagery of the act left everyone speechless. The silence that followed was heavy with grief and disbelief, broken only by murmurs of sympathy and outrage.

“Monster,” one of the officers muttered under his breath, while another said softly, “Poor child, god knows what she must’ve gone through.”

Nathan’s rage erupted. He slammed his hand on the table and vowed fiercely, “I’ll find out who did this and make sure they pay!”

Standing beside him was Lawrence Finch — Nathan’s mentor and their late father’s old friend. Lawrence had practically raised the Slade siblings after their parents died. He’d taught Nathan everything about detective work — from tracking clues to reading a criminal’s mind. Hearing Nathan’s fury, Lawrence placed a comforting hand on his shoulder, but his tone was tinged with regret as he said quietly, “You’ve got your hands full, son. You’ll probably have to miss Rosie’s graduation.”

At the mention of her name, Nathan’s expression darkened instantly. His voice turned cold and distant as he snapped, “Don’t bring her up. She’s nothing but bad luck. There’s no way I’m going to her graduation. I’m going to Gemma’s.”

Those words pierced Rosie’s lingering soul like a dagger. Even now, Nathan wanted nothing to do with her. After their parents’ tragic deaths, he had turned his pain into anger — directed entirely at her. He blamed Rosie for everything that went wrong. He said she was the reason their parents were gone. Eventually, he threw her out of the house, cutting all ties and declaring that she was no longer his sister.

Not long after, Nathan had rescued a young woman named Gemma Carter during a case. She was an orphan, and Nathan — perhaps out of guilt or loneliness — decided to take her in as his new sister. From that day on, Gemma became his “family,” and Rosie became nothing more than an unwanted shadow of the past.

Rosie had still tried to mend things. Even though he hated her, she continued to bring him lunch every day — rain or shine — hoping one day he’d forgive her. But he never did. When she died, she knew Nathan wouldn’t mourn her. If anything, he’d probably be relieved.

Back at the crime scene, Lawrence, deeply disappointed by Nathan’s harsh words, punched him lightly in the chest and said sternly, “How could you say that? Rosie’s a thoughtful kid. She’s been bringing you lunch every day without fail, quietly, without expecting anything in return. She was worried you wouldn’t like her. Open your eyes, you ungrateful brat.”

But Nathan only scoffed in disbelief. “Like I care. Anyway, let’s stop talking about her, Lawrence. We’ve got real work to do. Any missing persons reports?”

His assistant, Orson Marsh, flipped through his notes and replied, “No, nothing in the last two days from this area.”

Nathan frowned deeply. “Seriously? The woman’s been missing for days, and no one noticed? What kind of irresponsible family is that?”

Rosie’s spirit trembled as she heard those words. The irony was unbearable — he was talking about her, yet he didn’t even realize it. She had been missing for days, but no one had filed a report because she had no one left to care.

As the team wrapped up the initial scene, Nathan and the others headed out for lunch. Lawrence, however, was lost in thought. Something felt off. After a moment, he asked, “Why hasn’t Rosie brought you lunch these days?”

Nathan replied dismissively, “She probably couldn’t keep up the act anymore. Figures.” He laughed bitterly, unaware of how cruel his words were.

Lawrence’s anger flared again. “No way. That girl’s come rain or shine for years without missing a single day. Something must’ve happened. You should call her.”

Nathan sighed in annoyance. “Don’t bother, Lawrence. This is just another one of her games. She called me the other day, probably to complain or something. I told her to come to Gemma’s graduation, and she refused. Guess she’s sulking now.”

Lawrence was about to argue further when Nathan’s phone rang. The moment he saw the caller ID, his entire demeanor changed. His scowl softened, and his voice turned gentle as he answered. Rosie already knew who it was — Gemma Carter, the sister Nathan chose over her.

Standing there, unseen and unheard, Rosie’s heart ached. Even in death, she remained the ghost in her brother’s shadow — invisible, unwanted, and unloved. But now, as she looked at the blood-soaked remains of her body and the brother investigating her death, a dark resolve began to form within her fading spirit.

If Nathan couldn’t see the truth in life, perhaps he would see it in death.

She would make sure of it.

The story closes on a chilling note, blending tragedy, betrayal, and poetic irony. Rosie, the murdered girl no one noticed missing, watches her brother — the man who despised her — unknowingly seek justice for her. As the investigation unfolds, secrets about their family, Rosie’s disappearance, and Nathan’s misplaced hatred are bound to surface. But for now, only Rosie knows the cruelest truth of all — that the “victim” he’s hunting is the sister he already buried in his heart long ago.

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