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Fallen 167

Meadow was about to lose her damn mind

That’s if she hadn’t lost it already

Alaric, come on,she panted. You can’t do this.” 

I felt my lips twitch. 1, in fact, can, love. You’re at my mercy now, remember?And then I raised my fingers to my mouth and sucked her sweet juices off them

Meadow’s gorgeous eyes followed every single moment, and when she swallowed, I knew what she wanted

To taste herself

However, I wasn’t done yet

I walked over to the desk, pulling it open so I could take out the leather crop. When I turned to face Meadow, her eyes were wide, filled with lust as she breathed hard

She looked so fucking amazing, panties off, nipple clamps on her perky nipples. The way her hands and legs were stretched nearly all the way out like a fourpoint star

My cock jumped in my pants for the umpteenth time tonight. It was threatening to be let out. To be released. I wanted to be inside of her so fucking bad

But I wasn’t going to rush into it. This had been a long time coming. And Meadow needed to learn how to be patient

And also needed to be punished for her stubbornness. Her defiance. My gaze shifted to the glass filled with ice that I had brought in here. The ice was almost completely melted, so that was off the table for now

However, I still reached for it, enjoying the feel of the cold, wet glass in my hand. For the longest time, I couldn’t feel heat or cold. And now that I could, the relief that I felt could not be explained in simple words

Nearby, Meadow whimpered. Alaric” 

Dropping the glass, I approached her with very slow steps, the crop in my hand swinging casually as if I had all the time in the world

And I did

Meadow, howeverdidn’t

She was panting, trembling with need. Her thighs were slick with sweat, and her pupils were so blown out I could barely see her hazel orbs

Alaricshe breathed again, pleading now, voice so heavy with desperation. She wasn’t begging me yet

But she would

1/4 

I stopped just a foot away from her and tilted my head. Look at you,I murmured, dragging the flat end of the crop along the inside of her thigh. All of that attitude and deflance, and now you’re nothing but a trembling mess, dripping only for me.” 

She swallowed, her lips parting like she wanted to speak. Although, no words came out

All night, she had been trying to push me

And now it seemed as though she’d just realized that she wasn’t going to get off that easy tonight

A corner of my lips pulled up. Still think you’re in control?” 

She whimpered. NoI never thought I was.” 

My gaze narrowed. Say it, then.” 

Meadow bit down on her bottom lip, and then: If I say it, will you let me come?” 

The words weren’t even completely out of her mouth before I snapped the crop across her thigh. Meadow yelped

The fact that you’re trying to negotiate with me tells me you want to be in control, Meadow,I murmured. You never thought you were, but all your actions showed everything.” 

Meadow gasped softly, shaking her head. I’m not in control.” 

I let the crop trace up her thigh, brushing it just near her core without touching her where exactly she needed me. My jaw ticked. And who is?” 

You,she said quickly, her breath hitching. You are, daddy.” 

Fuck

My cock jumped again. The way she always called me that… 

Good girl,I praised

I started to circle behind her. Meadow’s body flinched on instinct, and I felt a smile tug at my lips. She was hypersensitive now. A simple flick of my wrist could send her screaming again

Or maybe sobbing

Or both

I raised the crop, letting it hover over her ass, and then I snapped it across the flesh, tighter and harder than the first time I did

Meadow cried out, a high pitched sound that traveled straight to my cock

One,I murmured. I could’ve made her count, but I decided against it

I brought it down again, enjoying the way her body jerked and she hissed

But then that hiss transitioned into a moan of pleasure

2/4 

TWO.” 

By the time I reached five, she was gasping for air, and I could tell that she was close to coming just from the stimulation. Her legs and hands were shaking against the cuffs, her back arching in such a beautiful manner that I had to bite down on the inside of my cheek to keep from fucking her right then and there

Slowly, I walked around until I was in front of her again, taking in every single inch of the flushed, fully wrecked goddess in front of me

Tell me what you’re feeling,I whispered

Her eyelids fluttered. Frustrated,she panted. I feeleverything, Alaric.” 

Gently cupping her cheek, I leaned in. And what do you 

want?” 

She hesitated. And so I pinched one of the nipple clamps and twisted

Meadow screamed. I want to cum! I want to cum, daddy!She paused. Please.” 

A slow smile crept ac

y face

There it was. There it fucking was

That wasn’t so hard now, was it?I murmured against her neck, letting my breath fan against her ear and reveling in the way she shivered. Begging for your release.” 

A soft gasp escaped her mouth

Say it again,I rasped. Beg me.” 

Please, Daddy,she whimpered. Please make me cum.” 

I dropped the crop, reaching for one end of the cross to free her hand

“Oh I will, my lovely doe,I murmured, reaching for the other and releasing it as well. She fell forward and my arm came around her waist even as her ankles were still tied. But first… I’m going to stuff this smart mouth with my cock.” 

Meadow shivered

Pulling her hair back, I pressed my nose to her neck. I’m going to sit on my chair-” 

You mean your throne?she breathed

My lips twitched. Sure. I’ll sit on it, and you will come to me. Understand?” 

She swallowed. Yes, Daddy.” 

Fallen

Fallen

Score 9.9
Status: Ongoing Type: Native Language: English
Fallen Summary & Review: Fallen

Meadow Russell arrives at an upscale hotel, heart fluttering with excitement and nerves. She’s about to marry the love of her life, Tyler, in a small, private ceremony — just the two of them. Clutching her bag, she approaches the front desk with a smile. “Hi, I have a reservation. Meadow Russell.”

But from the very first second, something feels off.

The receptionist’s red-painted lips curl into a mocking sneer, and her colleague exchanges a strange look with her. Meadow’s cheerful tone falters as confusion settles in. The woman scoffs, “You’re kidding, right?” The disbelief in her tone makes Meadow’s stomach twist. She frowns, insisting there must be a mistake, but both receptionists continue to look at her with something close to pity — and something else she can’t quite name.

Then comes the shocker.

According to the hotel records, she’s already checked in. Two hours ago. With a man. The receptionist even claims to have spoken with her — complimenting her “cute top.” The same white crop top with the word “BRIDE” written across it that she’s wearing now.

Meadow tries to rationalize it. Maybe Tyler had checked in under her name. Maybe it’s a simple mix-up. She laughs nervously and explains that her fiancé must have done it for convenience. But both receptionists seem unconvinced. One of them finally sighs and hands her a spare keycard, muttering, “I hope you get things sorted out.”

On her way up to the room, Meadow’s heart pounds in her chest. Something feels horribly wrong, but she refuses to believe it. Tyler would never do anything to hurt her. They’ve been planning this wedding for months — their dream elopement. She tries to calm herself, breathing in and out as the elevator ascends, but her hands won’t stop shaking.

When she finally reaches the room and swipes the keycard, her worst fears materialize before her eyes.

The moment the door opens, the sound hits her first — muffled moans, heavy breathing, the rhythmic creak of the bed. Then she sees them.

Her twin sister, Juniper, straddling Tyler, his hands gripping her hips as he thrusts into her without restraint.

The world stops. The bag slips from Meadow’s trembling hands and lands with a soft thud. The scene before her feels like a cruel joke — something ripped out of a nightmare. Her vision blurs with tears, her body frozen in disbelief.

For a full minute, she just stands there. Watching. Waiting. Hoping someone would scream “gotcha” and end this cruel trick.

But there’s no misunderstanding to clear up. No mistake. No illusion.

Her twin sister moans again, whispering, “Yes, that’s it, baby,” as if to drive the knife deeper into Meadow’s heart.

Something inside her shatters.

“Juniper…? Tyler?” she finally manages to whisper, her voice barely recognizable.

They both turn, startled. Tyler’s face twists in shock, then panic. He pushes Juniper off him, stammering, “Meadow, I swear, I thought she was you!”

It’s a pathetic excuse. One that doesn’t even make sense.

Juniper doesn’t even bother covering herself. She just smirks, tossing her messy hair over her shoulder like a queen enjoying the chaos she’s created. “Oh, please,” she scoffs. “It’s time we drop the act. This has been going on for a while.”

Meadow stumbles back, staring between them. “What are you talking about?”

Her twin rolls her eyes. “You really didn’t think he loved you, did you?”

It hits Meadow all at once — the hotel mix-up, the receptionist’s strange looks, the duplicate “Meadow Russell” check-in. Juniper had stolen her identity, her name, her wedding — and the man she loved.

Tyler tries to approach her again, naked and unashamed. He grabs her jaw gently, his expression hard. “You thought I loved you, Meadow? No. Juni’s the love of my life.”

The words pierce like knives.

Every memory — every kiss, every late-night conversation, every promise he made — turns to ash. She had believed in him completely, trusted him with her heart. And all along, he’d been sharing that same intimacy with her twin sister.

Meadow stares at Juniper, still unable to process it. The last time she saw her twin was two years ago. They’d grown apart after Juniper’s endless trail of lies and manipulation had driven a wedge between them. Juniper had always been the beautiful, daring, chaotic one — the one who got what she wanted, no matter who she hurt. But never, not in her darkest thoughts, had Meadow imagined she would do this.

Juniper laughs again, the sound sharp and cruel. “She’s in shock, baby. Maybe we should help her out of her misery,” she says mockingly, then pulls Tyler into another kiss right in front of her.

That’s when Meadow realizes this isn’t a mistake. This isn’t a sudden betrayal. It’s a plan.

Her sister had known exactly what she was doing. She had tracked Meadow down, learned about the wedding, and swooped in like a vulture to destroy what little happiness she had built. The matching outfit, the fake check-in — all of it was deliberate.

The pain turns into rage. Her tears blur her sight, her breath coming out in shaky bursts. Every muscle in her body screams at her to turn around, to run far away from the two people who’ve just ripped her soul apart.

But she doesn’t move.

She stands there, trembling, her heart breaking piece by piece as she watches her sister smirk and her fiancé — her almost-husband — stand there unashamed, not even offering a shred of remorse.

Tyler and Juniper exchange a look, and she realizes — they’re enjoying this. They want her to see. To suffer.

Meadow’s hands ball into fists. She feels like she’s watching her life crumble in real time, and there’s nothing she can do but breathe through the ache and pray she doesn’t collapse.

Every part of her screams that this is the moment she loses everything — her trust, her love, her family.

And yet, deep inside, a spark ignites — not of despair, but of something darker. A promise that this won’t be the end of her story.

Because betrayal that deep doesn’t fade. It carves itself into your bones. And Meadow Russell — heartbroken, humiliated, and hollow — walks out of that hotel room knowing one thing for certain.

She will never forgive them.

And one day, they will both pay for what they’ve done.

 

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